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Post  MarthaJonesFan on Fri Feb 11, 2011 8:01 pm

I'm not gonna post them all here, but you can read them by following these links to MJF's Stories!







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Post  cherlloydbrat on Sat Feb 12, 2011 10:28 am

i quite like thesse
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Post  MarthaJonesFan on Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:44 am

Thanks CiT!

Any future ones will be posted here, it's just that I'm not posting them all, as it would take forever!

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Post  MarthaJonesFan on Tue Feb 15, 2011 10:49 am

The latest episode, Series 4 Episode 9. Please comment!

Funny. I hate Valentine's Day, yet I still do a Valentine's special. Razz Anyway, just a day fashionably late in true MJF style, here's Episode 9. Smile





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Mia Turner was very happy. It was the 14th February. Her birthday, aswell as Valentine’s Day! She got double presents from Connor, her husband. She got some new shoes, like she was promised when they were ruined at the swamp, aswell as her favourite chocolates in a heart shaped box. She felt so happy, and the thought of her getting more from the ARC team was overwhelming!
“We’ve gotta go”, Connor said, referring to him and Abby.
“What? Work doesn’t start for another hour”, Mia was confused.
“Cutter wanted us two for something”, Connor lied. Mia could tell he was up to something. She kissed him goodbye, and he went out the door with Abby.

“So, when she comes in, we all jump out and shout HAPPY BIRTHDAY”, Cutter explained, at the ARC. They were planning to surprise Mia as she walked in. She was due for work any minute, and Mia wasn’t one to be late. The team all hid. Mia walked through the doors, almost on queue.
”Hello?”, she said.
“SURPRISE!”, everyone shouted, after Connor’s countdown. Mia jumped back in shock, but she was so happy that everyone cared so much for her. Lester never got this on his birthday. The team all rushed up to Mia to hand her presents. Cutter gave her a box of chocolates and a kiss, Danny gave her some wine, amongst so many others. Even Lester gave Mia some flowers and a hug.
DING DING! DING DING! DING DING!
“Anomaly detected. The day is Monday, so can Cutter, Connor, Abby, Mia and Harry get ready to go out for the anomaly”, Jess announced.
“I swear more anomalies open on Mondays…”, moaned Sarah. It was true. Every Monday for the last couple of months an anomaly had opened. For the other days, it was varied.

This anomaly was at a café. It was open, and it was fairly busy due to it being rush hour. The member of staff serving customers went to the toilet. She noticed a bright light coming from outside. She went to investigate. She thought it was simply the reflection of the scorching sun outside, but she couldn’t have been more wrong. She saw something that was like a glitter ball with shards of glass floating around it. Something inside it moved. The girl moved back, as a really large dinosaur stepped out into the small place. She was pushed against a wall. That was the only place she could go. The dinosaur was so large that it took up the rest of the room. Its long neck stretched out so high above the café building. The girl screamed for her life…

At the ARC, Monday’s team had just left. The rest of them looked seriously bored.
“I sort of wish Helen Cutter would turn up and shake things up”, Danny joked.
“Oh, you know me Danny. I know when I’m wanted”, a voice shouted down from above. On queue, it was Helen Cutter.

“In here, right?”, Harry checked, standing outside a café. Connor looked at the Handheld Detector.
“Nope, the next one up”, Connor replied.
“There are so many in this town”, Harry said as they carried on walking, “I mean, business can’t be that good with punters shared out between other cafés”.
“Depends on the quality of the cafés really”, Cutter counteracted what Harry said, “If a café has bad service and dirty tables, do you think they’d have good business?”.
“Where’s all this come from?”, Mia asked Cutter about his knowledge of cafés.
“I worked in one when I was 18. It was a pretty bad one, but it was the only job I could get. I needed some money when I wasn’t at university. I helped improve it”, Cutter sounded proud of himself.
“Here it is”, Connor pointed out. They stood outside the last café of the town. They could already see a dinosaur’s head over the top. They ran inside to find out the story. The guests were all at the back door. They were shocked to see a massive dinosaur trapping the staff member.
“It’s a Diplodocus”, Connor explained, “Late Jurassic. Just a veggie”.
“But it’s getting distressed in the confined space. We also need to shut the girl up”, Cutter sorted out what they needed to do.
“Right. How?”, Abby was confused.

“What now?”, Claudia asked Helen.
“Oh I’m just here to wish you a Happy Valentine’s Day. And to wish Mia a happy birthday”, Helen lied.
“How did you know it was Mia’s birthday?”, Jenny asked.
“Jenny, I thought you were a smart woman”, Helen did cryptic well. She wasn’t one to reveal anything to anyone.
“Ah, Helen. Have you come to hand yourself in?”, Lester asked his usual question.
“You’d be lucky”, Helen replied. She noticed some soldiers coming up to get her. She was in the balcony, where she normally stood when speaking to the ARC team like this. She pulled out a gun and shot both soldiers.
“Now listen up”, Helen shouted, “Soon, anomalies will be everywhere. You won’t be able to keep them away from the public. You won’t be able to control them. It could be catastrophic, but when done as part of an experiment…”.
“No!”, Danny realised what Helen was going to do. Helen smirked and opened an anomaly. She stepped through and closed it on the other side.
“Is she always like this?”, Jess asked.
“Pretty much”, Jenny replied.

The Diplodocus was going mental in the small back garden of the café.
“I could go and get the girl?”, Harry suggested.
“No, it’s too dangerous”, Cutter disapproved.
“I’ll be fine”, Harry reassured him. He nodded and she went in to the distressed girl.
“Hi, I’m Harriet, but you can call me Harry. I need you to try and keep calm for me”, Harry introduced herself.
“KEEP CALM?! Haven’t you seen the dinosaur?”, the girl shouted.
“No, I didn’t notice it”, Harry sarcastically replied, “But in all seriousness, you’re not helping it! You need to shut up!”. The girl was still screaming.
“OK, change of plan. Keeping calm isn’t possible when there’s a veggie dinosaur in front”, Harry said to herself. She turned back to the girl, “We need to get you out. Can you see where I got here? There’s a small path there. Follow it back to my friends over there”. The girl obeyed. Harry was about to follow when the Diplodocus moved back. It stepped right in front of Harry. She went to go back, but another foot was there. She was trapped.

Captain Mitchell arrived at the anomaly site.
“We’ve got a Diplodocus in the garden”, Abby explained, “It’s getting really restless”. Mitchell nodded and walked to the garden with his soldiers.
“Jess, how’s the anomaly going?”, Abby spoke into her earpiece.
“The anomaly’s still fine. Is there a creature incursion?”, Jess asked.
“I’ve already told you, haven’t I?”, Abby was confused.
”We’ve been quite busy here”, Jess told Abby, in a nutshell.
“OK. But yes, we do. It’s a Diplodocus”, Abby replied, “We’ll keep you updated”. As soon as she finished that sentence, a soldier walked outside with the girl.
“I’ll take care of her”, Abby said to the soldier.

Harry was trying not to panic. But now she knows exactly how the girl felt. The Diplodocus kept moving. Its feet narrowly avoiding Harry each time. She need to keep on her toes. Back at the back door, Connor, Cutter and Mia were moving the café punters away. The soldiers would need to speak to them to make sure they didn’t sell their story to the newspaper. Connor felt a lump in his pocket. He took whatever it was out. It was an Anomaly Opener.
“Cutter, I’ve got an idea!”, Connor shouted, “If I can open an anomaly right in front of the Diplodocus, then we can get it to walk straight through it!”. Cutter smiled.
“Hurry up with that then Connor!”, Harry shouted from where she was. Connor went to the front of the Diplodocus, trying not to attract its attention just yet. He opened the anomaly. The dinosaur noticed. It was a massive anomaly to the correct time period.
“Go on mate, walk through!”, Connor encouraged it. It walked through. Harry was relieved. She ran and hugged Connor.
“Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!”, she was ecstatic.

As usual, they returned to ARC. After hearing what happened with Helen, Cutter retired to his lab. He found a box of chocolates and a card. He opened the card. It read “To Nick. No-one is safe. H.C”. Cutter knew who it was from. There was knock on the door.
“Come in”, muttered Cutter. It was Claudia.
“I got you this”, she handed him a present.
“You didn’t have to”, he smiled at her.
“I better go”, she shyly said to him. She walked out.

Helen Cutter was hiding in a deserted building. She was mapping out a plan for her experiment. It would commence…tomorrow…


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Post  The Oncoming Storm on Tue Feb 15, 2011 1:18 pm

Great story! Not a Primeval fan, but these are very cool!

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Post  MarthaJonesFan on Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:04 pm

The Oncoming Storm wrote:Great story! Not a Primeval fan, but these are very cool!

Thank you OS! The character of Harry is portrayed by Lenora Crichlow, so if you watch Being Human, Harry is basically a Primeval version of Annie. But alive. Razz

Mia, Harry, and also Lloyd (who's not there anymore) are not from Primeval. a64/aquatics64 (whatever you know him as!) created Mia, Dalek-Dan created Harry and I created Lloyd.

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Post  The Oncoming Storm on Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:07 pm

MarthaJonesFan wrote:
The Oncoming Storm wrote:Great story! Not a Primeval fan, but these are very cool!

Thank you OS! The character of Harry is portrayed by Lenora Crichlow, so if you watch Being Human, Harry is basically a Primeval version of Annie. But alive. Razz

Mia, Harry, and also Lloyd (who's not there anymore) are not from Primeval. a64/aquatics64 (whatever you know him as!) created Mia, Dalek-Dan created Harry and I created Lloyd.
Oh yeah, I love Being Human. Smile

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Post  MarthaJonesFan on Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:15 pm

It's fantastic, is it not? Anyway, that's for the Being Human thread.

Here was the poster for the latest episode. I've been doing them all series, and they go up before the episode.


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Post  MarthaJonesFan on Wed Feb 23, 2011 10:17 pm

Episode 10, Part 1 of a 3 part finale, is here!!!!! PLEASE COMMENT!





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Long Time No See
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The ARC was busier than ever. Everyone was rushing around, trying to find the whereabouts of Helen Cutter. She had revealed to the ARC team that she was up to something. The problem was, the team didn’t know exactly what she was doing. They knew she was experimenting with anomalies, and they’d appear everywhere, but they wanted to know what Helen would get out of this, and the reason for doing it. What’s more, they were one man, or woman, down. It was Friday, which was Harry Stafford’s day off. She liked having a day to relax at home.
“Any sightings yet?”, Lester called as he watched down from the balcony outside his office.
“No”, most people shouted.
“Yes!!!!”, Connor ran in through the doors.
“You found something?”, Danny asked him.
“Yup. I checked the local CCTV cameras, and I spotted her entering this building that’s completely deserted. It’s gonna be demolished pretty soon”, Connor explained.
“Right, we need to get down there as soon as possible”, Nick Cutter started getting together a plan of action.
”Nick, Helen’s dangerous. Why are we going?”, Jenny asked.
“Jenny’s right”, Lester butted in from above, “It’s too dangerous for amateurs to go in. Let the professionals go”.
“But we know more about Helen. We’ve dealt with her countless times before. We can sort it out”, Abby argued. Everyone started talking and arguing at Lester at the same time.
“Cutter, could you please call your minions off me?”, Lester moaned. He spoke at normal level, but, amazingly, was heard over the racket the team were making.
“No ifs, no buts”, Lester said. And what Lester says, goes.

The soldiers left. Without them in the ARC, it was quite empty. There were a few researchers dotted around the place, and the team, and that was it. The team were really bored. All they could do was hope for an anomaly to open.
“Hey!”, Jess bounced over from her chair to where the team were gathered, “I could always sneak you out. I’ve got an overview of this whole place on my computer. I can close and open any doors I want to, and I could happen to accidentally allow you to escape”.
“Jess, you’re brilliant!”, Danny smiled.
”I know”, Jess joked. She went back to the Detector, which was her workstation. She brought up a new window, with an overview of the ARC. She clicked on a few doors, meaning they were locked. She turned out the lights. Lester was locked in his office, and couldn’t see anything.
“Go!!”, Jess shouted to the team. They legged it out of the doors. Jess deactivated the CCTV cameras outside of the ARC. The team got into the remaining cars and drove off to Helen’s hideout.

The soldiers, including Captain Mitchell, arrived at Helen’s base. She was prepared. She watched out of the dirty window on the top floor as they left their cars. She had a getaway though. She opened an anomaly and stepped through. She closed it on the other side…

Jess lit up the ARC again and reactivated the CCTV cameras. She then unlocked all doors.
”Jess, what on earth is going on?”, a distressed Lester called down from his office.
”There’s a problem in the system. I’m running a few checks right now”, Jess lied.
“Where are the team?”, Lester asked as he walked onto the balcony and down the ramp.
“I think they’re in one of the labs. Sarah wanted to show them something, I believe”, Jess was a very good liar. Lester seemed to believe it. He walked back up to his office.

Whilst the soldiers were searching the building, the team arrived. They walked into the building and proceeded to the stairs. They each took a floor to search. Cutter had the top floor. He walked in to the only room on that floor, behind a few soldiers. He saw a note stuck to the wall with blu-tac. Cutter picked it up and read it. It said “Disloyal Lend”. He was confused by this. He spoke to the other team members via his earpiece. They all met him up on the top floor. It was a struggle for Jenny, as she was wearing heels.
“But what could that mean?”, Sarah asked, “It seems like some anagram”.
“For what though?”, Claudia added.
“Surely there’s some website where we can type it in and find out what it could be?”, Mia suggested.

Harry was getting herself ready. She was going clubbing for the night with her friends. She hadn’t been clubbing for a year or two, so it was going to be fun for her.

Helen was in another time. It was the future. She saw the ruined buildings, rusty cars and cliff edges that she was now very familiar with. She walked over to the entrance of the future ARC. She edged open the door just enough for her to squeeze through, then pushed it back again. She walked over to the futuristic computer. Then she started tapping in data…

Connor and Sarah drove back to the ARC. They ran through the corridor and into the Main Operations Room. Lester saw them, but took no notice. He still thought they were in another lab.
“Jess, could you bring up an internet browser please?”, Connor asked her, panting.
“Sure. Why?”, Jess did so.
“Open Google and search for anagram creator”, Sarah commanded. Jess followed the orders.
“Now type in Disloyal Lend”, Connor finished. Jess did so, and loads of possibilities came up. After scrolling down, one of them stuck out like a sore thumb. They raced back to the building, after thanking Jess. Good thing it was only a 5 minute drive away.

Helen walked over to the corner of the room she was situated in the future ARC.
“Have you missed me?”, she smirked to the young boy, sitting there, tied up…

Connor and Sarah arrived back. They raced up the stairs, taking a quick break for Sarah to use her asthma inhaler, to the top floor where the rest of the team were.
“Helen’s in the future”, Connor blurted out as he burst through the doors.
“How do you know?”, Mia asked.

Harry was partying with her friends, dancing to her favourite song.

Helen walked back to the computer, and slotted in an Anomaly Opener. She pressed the screen several times, and typed in the code that was present on the side of the Artefact. She pressed more buttons on the screen, and anomalies started appearing everywhere.

Harry’s party was disturbed. Anomalies were appearing at her party aswell.
“Oh no”, she muttered to herself. A Raptor ran out one of them. Harry ran outside…

Back in the Future with Helen, her “friend” moved himself through an anomaly. It was one to the present day…

Anomalies were opening by the team aswell. And one of them, a young man, around 18 years old, jumped out. He was tied up.
“…It translates as Lloyd Daniels”, Connor finished his sentence, shellshocked. The young man was indeed Lloyd, who was once thought lost. The team didn’t know whether to be shocked or happy, or both…


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Post  MarthaJonesFan on Sat Nov 05, 2011 10:19 am

To stay up to date on Primeval Stories, I suggest keeping an eye on the respective threads on DWFO and DWT.net, the website is not up-to-date. Smile

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